Unas sugerencias:

1. As soon as I wake up... I wash the teeth.

En inglés no se dice "wash" en cuanto a los dientes, sino "brush". Sería mejor escribir "I brush my teeth"

2. Before I go out for the evening... I prefer go out for the night.

Esta frase no tiene mucho sentido...me parece que debes escribir algo que haces antes de salir de tu casa por la noche, por ejemplo: "I brush my hair" (me cepillo el pelo)

3. I am irritated by people who are always... hitting me.

Ahora puedes corregir mi español

Bueno, muchas gracias Limonada.

Sí, con gusto te lo corrijo.

Yo creo que lo que escribiste en tu parte en español está toda bien.

De nada

Y gracias   

Hello againg.

The days I do these are Mondays and Thursday, because are the days that I have English. So, I am going to try to put on the exercise that I do the respective days.

Here we have three news exersices relacionship with the traffic problems, and the first, with the cat.

The first, I have to describe (It can be invented), an animal.

THE CAT:

Introduction:

I think the cat is a independent animal, with all the letters. They are always try to do the thing they only (it's says, without us), they don't need us help.

What do they do?:

The cats are a rarely animal; they sleep at day, and sleep at night. The like run a lot, and playing with small things, (yarn for example). And, they always beginning to run, and shout at longer houres at the night, and we can't slee. Je, je, je.

Yours habitat:

It's an animal that proviend of the hotest cities of the world; until Egipt, for example, and they love the hot, and the things with sheterly texture.

They eat...:

They love the fishes and the red flesh. The milk too. I like giving a meal called "Whiskas", and my cat it's not acostumbrated to the fishes, and other things, that are acostumbrated to other cats.

Your personality:

The cat use to be a very strange animal, I am going to given an example: when you call your cat, they come with us, but then a series of mimos (I don't know how it's says ), they go to an other place. How can be interpretad this? It's not a razonaly expression? It is?

Well, In conclussion, I think, they're a strangely animal, hottest, independently, and naughtly animals.

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The second, I have to make a project relacionship with the traffic problem (It can be invented too), and the project It was to Joan, that he need it.

Hi Joan.

It's a pleasure to given you my project of the traffic problem of my city (Montevideo, Uruguay.)

I think Montevideo haven't got a lot of traffic problems. I see the people with their cars, and I don't see in absolutely, any problem.

We are not a superpolluted country, and here we have work, (affortunately), and the money runis perfectly.

The gobernment put of telemáforos (I don't know how it's says too ), and there, there are a lot of message, relacionship with the transport.

Although the cars, there are a lot of bus, that we use to travelled to a longer parts of the country.

Well, I hope you make your project very good. Luck!!

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And the last, I have to describe my city, by, the point of view of the traffic problems, againg. (Of course, it's invented, it's not real.)

The problem of the traffic transport it's gettin worse.

The people are going to use gas oil, because it's cheaper and more productive. The gas oil, contaminated all the cities, and it's worse for us, animals, plants, etc.

I can see the government it's try to keep on this pollution, and they try to do something.

People always go to work by our respective cars with gas oil, and I see the bus are very used by us. The taxis are very use too.

In our cuty, the government are trying to do something, beginnig with the telemáforos ( )

In conclussion: the problemas of the traffic it's getting better, I think.

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Thanks all of you, a lot.

Hello again. I have one more exercise...

I have to describe a country. Invented obviously.

URUGUAY.

Uruguay it's a beautiful country, where you can do anything you want. It's located in a temper zone, so, you've never been hot, very hot, or cold, very cold. So, you can come here. And then are some tips:

* In Uruguay there are a lot of clubs, where you can fun very well, as for example: water pool, termas, tennis, football (and many others sports), pool, etc...

* You can fishing, and buy or hire ships (they are only cheap and confortable.)

* Many restaurants waiting for you; meeting to Uruguayan food: roast, mate, etc...

* Hire houses, and or go to the best hotels, in the zone since Montevideo.

* Meeting the new firelight who are gonna be building in three months!

* You can also travelled by aeroplane, by over the city.

So, what you waiting for?! We are waiting for you replently!

Thank youuuuuuuuu

Cita:

THE CAT:

Introduction:

I think the cat is a independent animal, with all the letters la palabra "letters" no funciona en esta frase. They are always trying to do things by themselves (that is to say, without us), they don't need us to help.

What do they do?:

The cats are a rarely animals; they sleep at during the day, and sleep at night. They like running a lot, and playing with small things, (yarn for example). And, they always beginning to run, and shout at longer houres late at the night, and we can't sleep. Je, je, je. (En inglés se ríe con una h [he, he, he])

Their habitat:

It's an animal that proviend<---no sé qué quieres decir  of the hottest cities of the world; until even Egypt, for example, and they love the heat, and the things with sheterly <----no entiendo  texture.

They eat...:

They love the fishes and the red meat. The milk too. I like giving a meal called "Whiskas", and my cat is not accustomed to the fishes, and other things, that other cats are accustomed to.

Their personality:

The cat used to be a very strange animal, I am going to given an example: when you call your cat, they it comes to you,

but then a series of mimos (I don't know how it's says ), they go to an other place. How can be interpretad this? It's not a razonaly expression? It is?Lo siento, no sé qué estas tratando de decir

Well, In conclussion, I think they're strange animals, hottest<---(esto significa que los gatos tienen calor o son calientes), independently, and naughtly animals.

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The second, I have to make a project relacionship with the traffic problem (It can be invented too), and the project It was to Joan, that he need it.

Hi Joan.

It's a pleasure to given you my project of the traffic problem of my city (Montevideo, Uruguay.)

I think Montevideo haven't got doesn't have a lot of traffic problems. I see the people with their cars, and I don't see in absolutely, any problem at all.

We are not a superpolluted country, and here we have work, (affortunately), and the money runis perfectly.

The gobernment puts of telemáforos (I don't know how it's says too ), and there, there are a lot of messages, relacionship with the transport. <---no entiendo esta frase, lo siento

 Although the Besides cars, there are a lot of buses, that we use to travelled to a longer more distant parts of the country.

Well, I hope you make your project very good. Good luck!!

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And the last, I have to describe my city, by, the point of view of the traffic problems, againg. (Of course, it's invented, it's not real.)

The problem of the traffic transport is it's getting worse.

The people are going to use gas oil, because it's cheaper and more productive. The gas oil contaminates all the cities, and it's worse for us, animals, plants, etc.

I can see the government is trying to stay on top ofthis pollution, and they are trying to do something.

People always go to work by our their respective cars with gas oil, and I see the buses are very used by us. The taxis are very used too.

In our city, the government are is trying to do something, beginning with the telemáforos ( )

In conclussion: the traffic problems are getting better, I think.

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Thanks all of you, a lot.

Espero haberte ayudado. Hay algunas frases que no puedo corregir porque no tienen mucho sentido en inglés, lo siento. Y en cuanto a los telemáforos...no sé si existe una palabra equivalente en inglés porque nunca los he visto .



Ultima edición por Limonada el Jue Jun 19, 2008 12:21 am; editado 3 veces

Cirillo escribió:

Hello again. I have one more exercise...

I have to describe a country. Invented obviously.

URUGUAY.

Uruguay it's a beautiful country, where you can do anything you want. It's located in a temperate zone, so, you're never hot, very hot, or cold, very cold. So, you can come here. And here are some tips:

* In Uruguay there are a lot of clubs, where you can have fun very easily well, as for example: water pool, termas "Termas" no es una palabra inglesa, quieres decir "saunas" o algo diferente?, tennis, football (and many others sports), pool, etc...

* You can go fishing and buy or hire ships (they are only cheap and comfortable.)

* Many restaurants are waiting for you; offering/where you can find Uruguayan food: roast, mate, etc...

* Hire houses, and or go to the best hotels, in the zone since Montevideo area.

*See the new firelight which is going to be built in three months!

* You can also travelled by aeroplane, by over the city.

So, what you waiting for?! We are waiting for you replently"Replently" no es una palabra inglesa

Thank youuuuuuuuu

Espero no haber cambiado el sentido de tu párrafo demasiado... Que me corrijan si hay errores