Hola a todos. Me gustaría que me corrigieran una serie de ejercicios que tengo en inglés, a ver si me pueden decir los errores.

Son dos historias, luego les pongo lo siguiente...



Y la otra es ésta:

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Siento no poder ayudarte cirillo
pero mi inglés es bastante pésimo.  
De todas formas ánimo y mucha suerte

 

Cirillo escribió:

Hola a todos. Me gustaría que me corrigieran una serie de ejercicios que tengo en inglés, a ver si me pueden decir los errores.

Son dos historias, luego les pongo lo siguiente...

It was a horrible day in Massachusetts. The trees were moving, there wasn't any bird's noise, the flag was moving a lot like the trees, and the rain didn't stop falling. I had been drinking coffe, very hot, when suddenly all the lights of my house dimmed off.

I was very nervous; more than ever. I didn't know what I had to do, so, the first i think about it was to start to shout. No body listened to me, but in a moment, I had a feeling, a very bad feeling. I walked to my bathrrom: no body, in my room: no body in the living-room; neither in the kitchen. And suddenly, a hand touched my shoulder: a strong cold passed over my body, this hand, full of evil, full of cold, full of frightening, was still there.

In a few seconds, I saw the hand, and  then, a terrible man, with dark eyes, an evil look, I began to shout again. He said to me: " everything is going to be ok", then: "just, do what I want". With my crying eyes, the man started, and suddenly, a bell rang, strongly. It was the ring of my house. I opened my eyes, went to the door, and there he was, my father, with a beatiful cat. "This is for you", he said.

All had been a dream. I couldn't believe it.

Y la otra es ésta:

She shut the door and picked up the telephone. She was very happy with those news. A new member of the family would be coming soon! The first call was to the parents, with 76, and 75 years old, respectively. The woman, called Sarah, was 30 years old, and her husband, 34 years old. He and she worked together as orderers of a bank. They had  a lot of money! They were rich!, with millions, and millions of dollars, and going to move to another house, but Sarah and Michael didn't know what the future is made of.

Next month, in 1981, in London, Michael had been working, when suddenly, he couldn't breath. Sarah was in her house, and decided to call  her husband. Silence. Silence again. She tried again. Silcene again.

Nervous, she went to the bank. She crashed. Sarah, was dead. A lot of people around her, looked that Sarah was waiting for a baby; they couldn't believe it! There was  a lot of cry. The people caught the cellphone of Sarah, and called  her hasbund. No body's listening. Called again. No one again. In fact, they called  her mother. She answered, and...
-Hello!, hello!- she said - !hi!, hi!- said the person. He explained all and the police came to the scene.

On the coffins said: "Come baby, come"

Te puse en negrita las correcciones...  

Muchísisimas gracias Anamar.

Este "ejercicio", había que corregir qué era lo que estaba mal.

Primero marco la frase como estaba escrita con el error, y luego sin el error.

1)Yes, English likes me a lot.

Yes, English like me a lot.

2) My mother is a wifehouse but she used to be a typewriter.

My mother is a wifehouse but she use to be a typewriter.

3) I have been learning English since I ten o clock.

I have been learning English since ten o clock.

4)I am interested in spots. I am dying for the basket.

I am interesting in spots. I am dying for the basket.

5) I keep fit by joking and i only eat when i angry.

Ésta no la sé.

6)My ankle has grey hairs and he is a beggar.

My uncle has grey hair and he is a beggar.

7) I am borned to 1986. I am only sixty.

I was born in 1986. I'm sixty years old.

8) I learn English because i love them.

I'm learning English because i love them.

9) I like travelling by sheep because it is safer and you know a lot of people.

Ésta tampoco la sé.

10) No, my father never bit me.

No, my father never bits me.

Cirillo escribió:

Muchísisimas gracias Anamar.

Por nada, amigo!

Cirillo escribió:

Este "ejercicio", había que corregir qué era lo que estaba mal.

Primero marco la frase como estaba escrita con el error, y luego sin el error.

1)Yes, English likes me a lot.
Yes, English like me a lot.
Yes I like english a lot.

2) My mother is a wifehouse but she used to be a typewriter.
My mother is a wifehouse but she use to be a typewriter.
My mother is a housewife, but she used to be a typist.

3) I have been learning English since I ten o clock.
I have been learning English since ten o clock.
I have been learnig english since 10 o'clock.

4)I am interested in spots. I am dying for the basket.
I am interesting in spots. I am dying for the basket.
I am interested in sports. I'm dying for basketball.

5) I keep fit by joking and i only eat when i angry.
Ésta no la sé.
I keep fit by jogging and I only eat when I'm hungry.

6)My ankle has grey hairs and he is a beggar.
My uncle has grey hair and he is a beggar.

7) I am borned to 1986. I am only sixty.
I was born in 1986. I'm sixty years old.

8) I learn English because i love them.
I'm learning English because i love them.
I'm learning english because I love it.

9) I like travelling by sheep because it is safer and you know a lot of people.
Ésta tampoco la sé.
I like traveling by ship because it is safer and you meet a lot of people.

10) No, my father never bit me.
No, my father never bits me.
No, my father never beats me.

Ok, las correcciones estan en rojo, Cirillo...
Debes recordar siempre que I (yo) debe ir siempre en mayuscula.

Muchas gracias Anamar.

You are welcome, my friend! It's a pleasure to help you to get along with your task of learning english!  

Thank's you. Me too.

Kisses.

Cirillo escribió:

Thank's you. Me too.
Thank you! Mine too!

Kisses.

Correccion en rojo!

Aquí otro ejercicio.

En éste hay que agregarle adverbios que estaban marcados entre paréntesis.

1. I sometimes worry about him.

2. He is rarely a bad mood.

3. The man from the post office always says "hello" when he sees me.

4. I normally do the cooking at home.

5. I usually spend my summers managing a diving school.

6. You never must give up trying.

7. I go frequently for walks by myself.

8. She often travels to conferences abroad.

Aquí hay otro ejercicio había que terminar la frase según Present Simple, o Present Continuos. En los puntos suspensivos, hay que seguirla...

1. As soon as I wake up... I wash the teeth.

2. Before I go out for the evening... I prefer go out for the night.

3. I am irritated by people who are always... hiting me.

4. Whenever I travel by bus... I puting my radio.

5. When the telephone rings... I pick on.

6. As I grow older...  I feel I am getting very old.

7. I feel nervous when I have to... do homeworks for Maths.

8. I avoid people who are always... shouting to my brother.

Very thanks.

Cirillo escribió:

Aquí otro ejercicio.

En éste hay que agregarle adverbios que estaban marcados entre paréntesis.

1. I sometimes worry about him.

2. He is rarely a bad mood.
He is rarely in a bad mood.

3. The man from the post office always says "hello" when he sees me.

4. I normally do the cooking at home.

5. I usually spend my summers managing a diving school.

6. You never must give up trying.
You must never give up trying.-

7. I go frequently for walks by myself.
I frequently go for walks by my self.

8. She often travels to conferences abroad.

Aquí hay otro ejercicio había que terminar la frase según Present Simple, o Present Continuos. En los puntos suspensivos, hay que seguirla...

1. As soon as I wake up... I wash the teeth.

2. Before I go out for the evening... I prefer go out for the night.

3. I am irritated by people who are always... hiting me.

4. Whenever I travel by bus... I puting my radio.
Whenever I travel by bus... I put on my radio.

5. When the telephone rings... I pick on.
When the telephone rings... I pick it up.

6. As I grow older...  I feel I am getting very old.

7. I feel nervous when I have to... do homeworks for Maths.

8. I avoid people who are always... shouting to my brother.

Very thanks.

Thanks a lot! :wink:


Correcciones en italica....

Gracias.

Por nada, cariño, estamos para ayudarnos los unbos a los otros... :kiss